im sorry no
this was horrible... i can't believe i sat here and watched the entire thing. you've been around newgrounds for a long time and should definitely know what is humorous and what isn't by now. i truly can't believe you received a trophy for this and seeing that you did made me lose faith in newgrounds a little. i don't do any submissions myself so i can't say much about artwork (ill say simply that i've seen better)... but everything else including but not limited to the voice acting, the horrific excuses for jokes, and the lack of variety in your vocabulary (dude use a thesaurus if you can't think of any off the top of your head) were all terrible... just terrible. keep trying and work on some things. i know im being extremely harsh but take it as constructive criticism.